Dark World

Wandered  in  the dream  or It’s a real

Where I’m ,How I came ,it’s not clear

Baffled by thoughts,Succumbed in fear

I pinched  my flesh,To bring me in real

Who cast me spellbound, illusionary vision,Or a Miracle

Welcome to the  black art ,A Witchcraft land

Named Hogwarts Castles,bestowed a magical blend

Potter,a famous name,Born with fame

Riddle,A woeful devil,Bring a shame

Voldemort, called by other name

More powerful,A Sinister prey

Veiling Chamber of Secrets and A Snake

Hermione and Weasley,wail and  Prays

Harry!Harry Potter,Save us from his cave

Who knows Riddle bloodthirsty games

 A Protector of Castles Wall,Gallantry Son of Lilly’s womb

A lady with beauty and brain

 A Thunder voice ,sharp brimmed rays falls from heaven enchanted

Harry  will butcher Riddle fame

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      1. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚Its something challenging for me .Its for a readers bcoz they are a die-hard fan of Harry Potter .Its a long time I haven’t watch any series of it.Just a try to write something different.

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  1. “Potter,a famous name,Born with fame

    Riddle,Aย woeful devil,Bring a shame

    Voldemort,ย called by other name”
    These lines were so attractive to me
    Voldemort!Voldemort!Voldemort
    Shayra!Shayra!Shayra
    This is what I cannot even dare to write.magics and fantasy writings are beyond my reach.
    Great choice and Your pen bleeded well

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    1. Thanks a lot ,its a real challenge for me.This time I’m craving for feedback bcoz its something which gave me goosebump while writing down .I’m afraid of posting it ,whether it works or not.Thanks your words gave me some relief๐Ÿ˜Š

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      1. Ha ha are nahi aisa ni hai.We all have our own space.You know with potter three things are attached to me but it’s long so it’s resisting me here..arrrrghhhhhhh

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      1. Yaa, I m one of those fans. You completely do justice with Potter. I think more word about my favorite Lovely Hermyni will be good. After all she was the backbone of this team…. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
        Complete justice with every character.

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      2. Hey, thank u so muchhh. It’s really sweet of you. I will try my best. You encourage me at the extreme level. I m feeling lucky to get a friend like you. โคโคโคโค

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  2. Interesting poem !!! I just wanted to go in these castles surrounded by river. Nice poem!!! Nice lines !!! Nice devil’s!!! Nice drama!!! Nice castle!!! Nice magic stick and I wanted it.!!!!

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  3. Shayra amazing bud! And you haven’t read or watched any from the series ๐Ÿ˜ถ we are no more friends then ๐Ÿ˜‚
    What more joy a potterhead can receive when he reads such marvel during the 20 years celebration of Harry Potter! Good going bud!!

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    1. Thank you so much .I have seen it yesterday ,harry Potter and deadly Hallowe’en part2 and I enjoyed it .But I’m not a die-hard fan of him .Its for my readers bcoz here many bloggers are fan of him๐Ÿ˜Š

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  4. Beautifully written! You’ve expressed the dark world very well and that too in the form of a poem. Very few can actually express so beautifully through the rhymes and prose. Lovely๐Ÿ˜Š

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