Dark World

Wandered  in  the dream  or It’s a real

Where I’m ,How I came ,it’s not clear

Baffled by thoughts,Succumbed in fear

I pinched  my flesh,To bring me in real

Who cast me spellbound, illusionary vision,Or a Miracle

Welcome to the  black art ,A Witchcraft land

Named Hogwarts Castles,bestowed a magical blend

Potter,a famous name,Born with fame

Riddle,A woeful devil,Bring a shame

Voldemort, called by other name

More powerful,A Sinister prey

Veiling Chamber of Secrets and A Snake

Hermione and Weasley,wail and  Prays

Harry!Harry Potter,Save us from his cave

Who knows Riddle bloodthirsty games

 A Protector of Castles Wall,Gallantry Son of Lilly’s womb

A lady with beauty and brain

 A Thunder voice ,sharp brimmed rays falls from heaven enchanted

Harry  will butcher Riddle fame

90 thoughts on “Dark World

      • rprakashrao June 27, 2017 / 5:09 pm

        Though ur post quite interesting!

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      • Shayra June 27, 2017 / 5:12 pm

        Phew,thanks it bring lots of effort to write something like this.

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      • rprakashrao June 27, 2017 / 5:14 pm

        I know ….u r specialist of writing different subjects.. Shayra**

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      • Shayra June 27, 2017 / 5:19 pm

        Aw!Thats so sweet of you.Thank you ,you made my day.Sometime I just try to challenge myself as all we do in writing๐Ÿ˜Š

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      • rprakashrao June 27, 2017 / 5:09 pm

        U have not mentioned our Indian superheroes.. Lol

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      • Shayra June 27, 2017 / 5:11 pm

        ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚Its something challenging for me .Its for a readers bcoz they are a die-hard fan of Harry Potter .Its a long time I haven’t watch any series of it.Just a try to write something different.

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      • rprakashrao June 27, 2017 / 5:13 pm

        OK I was just kidding ..it’s really fresh and nice but I was looking for deshi superheroes thank god u have mentioned flying Matt and dhrona!!

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      • Shayra June 27, 2017 / 5:15 pm

        ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚vo kaun h .I only watch Tom and Jerry if I got time .No other Cartoon Shows.

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      • rprakashrao June 27, 2017 / 5:17 pm

        Hahaha…well said!!! But u may heart their fans it is a social media..be careful..but I cannot stop laughing.. U r just too much

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      • Shayra June 27, 2017 / 5:20 pm

        Oh,is it really that much bad.I wrote for his fans only,but if they not like then what’s the reason to try.

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  1. rprakashrao June 27, 2017 / 5:22 pm

    We all may try but its u who does it better!! I am impressed with ur reach!! Just blown away.

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  2. ujjwalrealblog June 27, 2017 / 5:23 pm

    “Potter,a famous name,Born with fame

    Riddle,Aย woeful devil,Bring a shame

    Voldemort,ย called by other name”
    These lines were so attractive to me
    Voldemort!Voldemort!Voldemort
    Shayra!Shayra!Shayra
    This is what I cannot even dare to write.magics and fantasy writings are beyond my reach.
    Great choice and Your pen bleeded well

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    • Shayra June 27, 2017 / 5:26 pm

      Thanks a lot ,its a real challenge for me.This time I’m craving for feedback bcoz its something which gave me goosebump while writing down .I’m afraid of posting it ,whether it works or not.Thanks your words gave me some relief๐Ÿ˜Š

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      • ujjwalrealblog June 27, 2017 / 5:36 pm

        You must calm now.You chose a different genre of writing which majority on WP afraid to chose for or write.You are a tough competitor ha ha

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      • Shayra June 27, 2017 / 5:38 pm

        ๐Ÿ˜‚,Let see.but I never will compete with anybody here ,You can gave tough competition to me and others.So I should be careful to you๐Ÿ˜‚

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      • ujjwalrealblog June 27, 2017 / 5:46 pm

        Ha ha are nahi aisa ni hai.We all have our own space.You know with potter three things are attached to me but it’s long so it’s resisting me here..arrrrghhhhhhh

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      • Shayra June 27, 2017 / 5:48 pm

        So you are also a fan of him or something common in both of u.

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      • ujjwalrealblog June 27, 2017 / 5:51 pm

        No not at all

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      • ujjwalrealblog June 27, 2017 / 5:54 pm

        I am an admirer of hugh jackman,christopher nolan,elon musk,,bob dylan and M.S dhoni

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    • Shayra June 27, 2017 / 5:55 pm

      Oh ,so here I found a fan of Potter .Hope you will like it .I try to do justice to Potter .๐Ÿ˜

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      • Sayar_AV June 27, 2017 / 6:05 pm

        Yaa, I m one of those fans. You completely do justice with Potter. I think more word about my favorite Lovely Hermyni will be good. After all she was the backbone of this team…. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
        Complete justice with every character.

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      • Shayra June 28, 2017 / 12:05 am

        Thanks for your nice words,its really difficult for me to write on such things.But finally ,yo all,esp his fans liked it.Such a relief to hear that๐Ÿ˜Š

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      • Sayar_AV June 28, 2017 / 2:10 am

        Warm welcome. You wrote it beautifully.

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      • Sayar_AV June 28, 2017 / 2:28 am

        Pleasure is all mine dear. Have a nice day. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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      • Shayra June 28, 2017 / 11:07 am

        I have nominated you for Unique Blogger Award. Congrats๐Ÿ˜Š

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      • Sayar_AV June 28, 2017 / 12:41 pm

        Hey, thanks a lot… U r such a kind person. I will post soon.

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      • Shayra June 28, 2017 / 2:07 am

        Hey,I have read Madhurima where you can post your Article and poems in hindi.You can either send a letter to Danik Bhaskar and post it ,or simply send them mail on madhurima@dbcorp.in.

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      • Sayar_AV June 28, 2017 / 2:15 am

        Hey, thank u so muchhh. It’s really sweet of you. I will try my best. You encourage me at the extreme level. I m feeling lucky to get a friend like you. โคโคโคโค

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      • Shayra June 28, 2017 / 2:22 am

        Its pleasure reading your poems.๐Ÿ˜Š.Your Welcome

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      • Sayar_AV June 28, 2017 / 2:26 am

        Keep supporting.. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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  3. Shubham June 27, 2017 / 5:54 pm

    I’m always happy to meet a fellow potterhead ๐Ÿ˜Š
    Thanks for this poem on the HP world ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  4. Surya Pratap June 27, 2017 / 9:45 pm

    That certainly was nostalgic. Like the whole childhood of our entire generation stuffed in your little poem. Thanks for that.

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    • Shayra June 28, 2017 / 12:01 am

      Thank you sooooo much .I’m very happy that you all liked it ,as its seem challenging to me to write on this theme๐Ÿ˜Š.Thanks for visiting here.

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      • Surya Pratap June 28, 2017 / 12:03 am

        You keep posting such awesome posts. And I’ll certainly make sure to keep checking from time to time.

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      • Shayra June 28, 2017 / 12:07 am

        Thanks ,its so kind of you.I will sure visit to your post to read amazing content. Have a good day๐Ÿ˜Š

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      • Shayra June 28, 2017 / 10:51 am

        I have nominated you for Unique Blogger Award .Congrats๐Ÿ˜Š

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      • Surya Pratap June 28, 2017 / 1:26 pm

        Thanks for the honor, Shayra. I really appreciate that.

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      • Shayra June 28, 2017 / 1:40 pm

        Most welcome๐Ÿ˜Š

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  5. hati03nisa June 27, 2017 / 9:50 pm

    Yeeeaasss๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿป๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿป๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿป

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    • Shayra June 27, 2017 / 11:59 pm

      Thanks Nurgul.Glad to know that you liked it.Have you watched all series of Hary Potter movie.

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      • hati03nisa June 28, 2017 / 11:29 am

        I ve read all books and watched all movies in cinema and have now at home all as DVD๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…

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  6. PIYUSH BILANDI June 28, 2017 / 3:03 am

    Interesting poem !!! I just wanted to go in these castles surrounded by river. Nice poem!!! Nice lines !!! Nice devil’s!!! Nice drama!!! Nice castle!!! Nice magic stick and I wanted it.!!!!

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    • Shayra June 28, 2017 / 3:24 am

      Oh,You are a die-hard fan of Hogwarts Castles,Potter and his movie.I’m glad that you liked it.

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  7. Akhil Kumar June 28, 2017 / 4:15 am

    Shayra amazing bud! And you haven’t read or watched any from the series ๐Ÿ˜ถ we are no more friends then ๐Ÿ˜‚
    What more joy a potterhead can receive when he reads such marvel during the 20 years celebration of Harry Potter! Good going bud!!

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    • Shayra June 28, 2017 / 5:34 am

      Thank you so much .I have seen it yesterday ,harry Potter and deadly Hallowe’en part2 and I enjoyed it .But I’m not a die-hard fan of him .Its for my readers bcoz here many bloggers are fan of him๐Ÿ˜Š

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  8. Akhil Kumar June 28, 2017 / 5:40 am

    Watch the series it’s fab! I would recommend the book too

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    • Shayra June 28, 2017 / 5:43 am

      Yeah,I will watch Harry potter and A half blood prince today .Might be I got some idea to write it more beautifully bcoz I’m not fully satisfied with it.

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      • Akhil Kumar June 28, 2017 / 5:46 am

        Go in an order they you get to know each character well and you will know why there is so much of love for the series

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      • Shayra June 28, 2017 / 5:51 am

        Yes,Thats right step.Although I have watch few series,but it have been a long time ago ,now again same interest is developing in me.

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  9. Natasha Tungare June 28, 2017 / 6:05 am

    Beautifully written! You’ve expressed the dark world very well and that too in the form of a poem. Very few can actually express so beautifully through the rhymes and prose. Lovely๐Ÿ˜Š

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    • Shayra June 28, 2017 / 6:09 am

      Thank a lot for your kind words.It means a lot to me .I’m super happy that you liked it ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  10. Enigma June 28, 2017 / 3:11 pm

    A phenomenal piece! I was having jitters remembering all the seven books. And guess what tomorrow is 20th anniversary of Harry Potter!
    Enigma

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    • Shayra June 28, 2017 / 3:45 pm

      Oh,really.I dont know about it.I’m glad that you liked it.Thanks for stopping by.

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      • Enigma June 28, 2017 / 5:24 pm

        The pleasure is all mine!

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    • Shayra December 1, 2017 / 5:05 pm

      Thanks a lot buddy๐Ÿ˜Š. Feeling honoured and glad to hear you after a long time.

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  11. Brice Brand February 6, 2019 / 11:04 am

    Wow, this was usefull. Keep writing this kind of texts, you will get a lot of people to this post if you continue working on this. I will be coming back this domain more often. thx!

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