A darker side ,veiled behind mind
untainted soul embracing fear , anxiety ,Envy underneath
Uplifting a brighter side to cherish ,to applaud ,to breathe
Like a lamp enlightening the darkness !
Like a white pearl glittering in shell !
Life beholding the dark secrets of one’s life
A unnoticed ,unfolded phase of a human life
hysterical flaws of one side
Happy faces are more moron inside
Glamorous people sitting beside
Embodiment of diplomacy,hypocrites,shrewd from inside
Confronting in front of all like an innocent lamb
Genuine people blame for being a little champ
Technical revolution has made one lewd
This picture lingered in my mind
Mam, its a real small thing. My latest post ” a wish” needs a comment from you. Please help me if you can mam. Read it once. The comment means a lot to me. Otherwise i would not be asking for it like this mam. The link. https://snehdoshisite.wordpress.com/2017/05/28/a-wish/
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Yes ,sure .Thanks for giving me such honour .Thanks a lot
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Thank you very much mam.
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It’s my pleasure dear😄
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The pleasure is my that i got such a good help
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Anytime ,feel free to ask or if I can do any favour for u .
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Kind of a bit shameless of me. But mam if you know someone that can comment on it please forward me the name or you forward the link. The more wishes i get the better.
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Yeah ,I will send the link to my followers and request them to comment on your post.
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Oh mam ill be in debt of your help.
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Oh !it’s a very small thing dear.plz send me your site link again.
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The link. https://snehdoshisite.wordpress.com/2017/05/28/a-wish/
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Really really thank u mam.
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Omgggg…mam this worked..!!!…i already got a comment.
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That’s pretty good sneha
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Mam, how many people did you forward my link to ? And is vivian zems one of your followers ?
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Yes ,I have your link as my new post ,so that all my dear readers will visit .
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Our team is always ready to help our readers .
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Got it mam, thank you so much.
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My pleasure dear .Hope it help u
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Than u so much for sharing my post on your site .Its means a lot for us .We will try our best efforts to entertain and inspire our readers by writing good contents .Thanks for the biggest inspiration by sharing link .😊
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Thanks a lot for giving biggest inspiration and motivate to do best .👍
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Great post
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Thank you so much 😍.I’m glad you like it.
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Pleasure mate
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Wow. Beautifully written.
And the thought process was amazing. How did you come up with this post?
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Just a imagination .Just want to share something .Why people think that We have our own World like we live in fantasy world ,kalpanik duniya bcoz we write .This sometime pained me ,but it can’t stop me from writing.Why Is it so?.Writers k duniya mh kya humari pechan nhi h,no respect.
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This is good though.
People who think so have limited imagination. We don’t live in an imaginative world. We create it. There’s a difference. We are creative enough to create a completely different world unlike the world we live in.
Of course, it shouldn’t. Write more often and be as creative as possible. People who understand will understand and appreciate it.
Writers ke duniya me sabki alag penchan hai. Sab kisi na kisi me mahir hai. Haan, pehchan banana mushkil hai lekin assambhav nahi. Respect mi he jayega when people connect with what we write. I think we need to have patience. And take in the criticism and put it to best use. Won’t you agree!
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Yeah,I agree but after listening to these words humari khud k duniya h all that .I like to spend my time alone and think right not to tell anyone that We enjoy writing ,bcoz they won’t understand that .I’m not a writer ,just love to write my thoughts,imagination.
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We all as budding writers or likewise want to spend time in our own world creating stuff. And we know that we love writing. And we don’t need someone to validate it. It’s our thing, alone.
You are a writer and a very good one. Keep it up and keep inspiring.
Waise kaha se ho aap?
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From Jaipur and u?.Are u also 24.Exactly we love writing and few people can understand it .Sorry ,I said wrong ,You are not a shady ,darker or a pessimist person .A positive and kinda deep thinker who create his own World .If I’m not wrong?
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Currently I am in Bangalore.
I am 26 though.
Exactly. And we could care less about the people who dont understand.
You don’t have to apologise. Ever.
Yes, In a matter of speaking, you’re right.
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Yup😆
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😊
I am guessing you are working?
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I didn’t understand ,what you are talking about?.
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I was asking what do you do? Are you working ?
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Yes,I’m from teaching profession.and u?
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Oh, that’s awesome.
I am a software developer.
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No,this is awesome .You write beautifull .How you manage it ?.
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You are being too kind.
I am way too far from writing beautifully. But thank you very much.
I try. I try my best.
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Ya,I know you can .keep going and writing.Have a good day.
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Thank you. 😊
You write very well as well. Keep writing.
Have a great day yourself. ☺️
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Ya,Dont underestimate yourself .Hoping to read upcoming brilliant post of yours .Goodluck.👍
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Why thank you. You’re too kind.
Good luck to you too. ☺️
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Everyone is kind here ,it’s nothing a big deal .I liked your thoughts and enjoyed your post.Well ,recently some idea click in my mind .
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Well true. But most of them pretend to be nice. Not you. So thanks for that.
Thank you. And what idea is that ? If I may ask ?
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You can see in next upcoming post.Might be you found it little shady,darker but I want to write about every emotions,thoughts.
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I’m looking forward to it. Do let me know when you post.
And that’s good write everything.
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Hope so ,but I will let you know for sure.
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Thank you 😊
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Welcome,I have post it.Hope you will like it
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Oh, I am going to read it now!
I am sure I will like it. 🙂
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Let see
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Well, I do like it. 😀
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Really,🙄
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Why don’t you believe? 🙄
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It’s pretty fit on me,Its my random thoughts .Want to know people suffer same situation or I’m a alien😂
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No, you are not alien. People do come across this phase in their life. May be not the exact same way, but a close replication of it.
And you have articulated your thoughts pretty well. 😀
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Thanks a lot . Would I know your name?
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You’re welcome. 😀
I am kind of anonymous for a while, but you can address me as Aryan. Sorry about that. -_-
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It’s Okk ,Aryan .I asked your name so that I can thank to real person ,not a Enigma.😂.But what it mean Enigma?
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It is a screen name. Just for the dark side of things that I keep writing about. So.
And thank you. 😀 Really appreciate it. 😀
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I was curious to know ,so I ask.
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Okay. Do ask, if you want to know anything else. 😀
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Yeah,sure .Its very kind of you.
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Using my own words on me? I:P
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No ,not at all .I speak ,what i felt.You are a kind person ,you read my post .I said you that you are a little pessemist,darker ,shady one…still you dont get offended which I apologize later .It shows you are a kind person ,accept it.
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Thank you once again. 🙂
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“Happy faces are more moron inside
Glamorous people sitting beside”….lobed this line so much…I havent seen this work of yours but when I saw definitely I read it thrice….beautiful
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I’m very happy to hear that you read it thrice ,thanks a lot .Your work is commendable and I found Disciple In an Ant’s hermit ,masterpiece of yours.
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Yeah I too wish to write In a way as you do…Short and so expressive….Thanks once again for your continued support.Waise I wrote something new…Hope to see your presence there…
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Yeah,sure.
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Have you ever thought about writing an ebook or guest authoring
on other blogs? I have a blog centered on the same subjects you discuss and would
really like to have you share some stories/information. I know my viewers would enjoy
your work. If you are even remotely interested, feel free to shoot me an email.
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What??
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