Hear me from within
Dark deep soul
O! Clinch my fist, Clinch my tongue
Drag me back, Drag me back
O! I need your help, O! I feel the crack
Coil of silence in the blue water
Hammering my brain to stop
Hear me from within
Dark deep soul

Exposed aghast marks on whore
Embraced my love in serene of shore
Tingle on my chest , goosebumps on my neck
O! I’m drowning to Death, O! I’m Panting for breath
Hear me from within
Dark deep soul
O! In Nick of time, I pretend to be fine
Demons chained my soul, just leaving a name behind
O! It hurts, Yeah, it really hurts…
From where I heard creepy laughs
Coming from behind
Thirst to Survive , craving to being alive
Drowned in-depth of blue cold Sea
Shelled in arms of aquatic dead sea
Hear me from within…
Dark deep soul

26 thoughts on “Drowning

  1. mistimaan May 29, 2018 / 4:44 pm

    Loved it


  2. Enigma May 29, 2018 / 5:02 pm

    Absolute gorgeous!
    Enigma πŸ™‚ ❀


      • Enigma May 29, 2018 / 5:07 pm

        The pleasure is all mine!

        Liked by 1 person

  3. MEDHA CHUGH May 29, 2018 / 10:40 pm

    Got goosebumps while reading..it’s hard to imagine myself there..
    Nice poem


    • Shayra May 29, 2018 / 5:17 pm

      Thank you dear . thanks for reading . once , i tried to drown my head in water . It’s hard to pen down that feeling in words.
      Bit crazy act but it comes from no where.


      • MEDHA CHUGH May 29, 2018 / 5:24 pm

        My pleasure 😊
        You must have learnt how difficult is to even think of death. Life may be tough but every problem can be dealt with…


      • Shayra May 29, 2018 / 5:26 pm

        Right ! . We cant hold our breath for seconds and death brings whole of it .


  4. Abhijith Padmakumar May 30, 2018 / 9:45 am

    Great post Shayra πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘Œ. So deep and powerful !! Loved it so much πŸ˜‡


  5. kalyansparks May 31, 2018 / 2:41 am

    Loved it yaaaa..this us how one feels when we are in depression


    • Shayra May 31, 2018 / 3:40 am

      Yes, you can relate it with that . glad to see that you liked it

      Liked by 1 person

      • kalyansparks May 31, 2018 / 3:49 am

        To go on date with youπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚..just for chatting yaa


      • Shayra May 31, 2018 / 3:52 am

        I’m preparing for govt exams in these holidays so got little time to read and write on WP .


  6. vijaywriting June 4, 2018 / 8:15 am

    hey this vijay, i read your reviews , you write pretty well. A fellow blogger of mine is organizing a blog tour .She requires Book bloggers like you ,if your interested you can check this link(https://digitalreadsblogtours.wordpress.com/contact/ ), you can also contact her through mail which is available in the link. Thank you


    • Shayra June 6, 2018 / 8:54 am

      Thanku . thanks for reading it πŸ˜†


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