Sand To Ashes

Mortal body lurching in dusky light
Feeling nostalgia, faded memories
Melancholy sound echo in mind

Deadly silence begin to tease him
His pale skin disgraced him
Dark sting of pain throbbed his heart
Single inch of him craved for rebirth
Chapter of his life ends here
Realized him that….

It’s a Last breath from nasty land
Lie underneath, his awful hands
Crippled body deserted in solitude
Soul walked away in gratitude
Last time he imagined his love
Enthralled by beauty of her curves

Walking to different lane
He saw himself in pain
Deep crave to live once
Deep desire to cherish her
Courageously he took every step
What was next for holy crap
Sudden thunder, black clouds swept away
Demons called his name, dragged him away
No weeps , No mercy could save him
Karma, deeds will begin to chase him
No body, nothing goes with him

42 thoughts on “Sand To Ashes

  1. Nathprasad Dhanawat January 14, 2018 / 1:00 pm

    Wao .. πŸ‘πŸ‘
    beautiful use of words…
    Amazingly explained about the life of soul after death which clears the game of karma with life ..
    It’s really masterpiece buddy.. πŸ‘πŸ‘Œ


    • Shayra January 14, 2018 / 1:12 pm

      Thanks a lot buddy . Means a lot to me . I always crave to read your feedback. 😊


  2. mistimaan January 14, 2018 / 4:43 pm

    Loved your writing


  3. vishalbheeroo January 17, 2018 / 11:35 am

    Intense and beautiful imagery spun through an incredible imagination. Superb.


    • Shayra January 17, 2018 / 1:05 pm

      You always make me feel blessed and happy through your comments . Thanks for words of appreciatio. What you think about mail . Will you write ?

      Liked by 1 person

  4. Mehul Singla January 17, 2018 / 4:32 pm

    Your choice of words is amazing. I loved it. I love your writing styleπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘


    • Shayra January 17, 2018 / 4:35 pm

      Really, thanks a ton . It’s your first comment on my post . Mean a lot to me . Glad to know that my friend liked my writing style . You made my day . Dil toh kar rha k ye comment frame kr lu , hahahaha . Tki motivation milta rhe to write


      • Mehul Singla January 17, 2018 / 4:59 pm

        Hehe. It’s my first comment and I’ll regularly comment now. Yeah your writing style is awesome. Motivation is a must to keep writing..


      • Shayra January 17, 2018 / 5:02 pm

        Yup , yhi toh I need the most . Motivation . Infact, we all need the most .


  5. DOCUS January 18, 2018 / 3:58 pm

    Hmmm.Reading you after a long long time.You have really risen.Its very very beautifully crafted and especially the theme is what I loved the most.We can relate it to our real world,myths and books.Thats the most attractive aspect


    • Shayra January 18, 2018 / 4:01 pm

      Thanks a lot ujjwal . Your comments are precious to me and it means a lot . Glad to hear from you after a long time . Hope you will post something soon . Waiting for it πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘

      Liked by 1 person

  6. Sreeblogs January 20, 2018 / 2:13 pm

    Classy one. Good jobπŸ‘πŸ‘


    • Shayra January 20, 2018 / 2:16 pm

      Thanku so much . Thanks for reading my posts 😊

      Liked by 1 person

      • Sreeblogs January 20, 2018 / 2:39 pm

        My pleasure πŸ˜‡

        Liked by 1 person

  7. velvetscreams February 1, 2018 / 9:51 am

    You have wonderful poetry skills


    • Shayra February 2, 2018 / 6:21 am

      Thanks a lot for your wonderful comment 😊


      • velvetscreams February 2, 2018 / 7:13 am

        You are welcome


      • Shayra February 2, 2018 / 7:32 am



    • Shayra February 9, 2018 / 6:18 pm

      I’m overwhelmed with your regards .As it’s a previalge to receive such loving comment from you . You r one of my favorites . Well deserve πŸ‘.I love your writing skills😊


      • my valiant soul February 9, 2018 / 6:19 pm

        Now you see, I didn’t know that part of love from your side. Means so much S!


      • Shayra February 9, 2018 / 6:21 pm

        My real name is Gargi . You can call me by my name dear😊


    • Shayra February 16, 2018 / 6:03 pm

      Thanks a lot dear 😊. Means a lot . Thanks for visiting here


  8. charisma March 1, 2018 / 2:20 am

    I see you are a connoisseur in choosing your words. Beautiful poem with a lot of profundity! It’s combination of reality with the mystical concepts is beautiful. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚


    • Shayra March 1, 2018 / 3:03 am

      Thanks a lot 😊. Thanks for your wonderful comment . Highly appreciated 😊. Glad that you liked it.

      Liked by 1 person

      • charisma March 1, 2018 / 6:33 am

        My pleasure any time. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

        Liked by 1 person

  9. ayshamuhammed92 March 6, 2018 / 11:22 pm

    You are so real and is so amazing with your words!!! Talented and a beautiful divine goddess of the universe!!! God. Loved this one thoroughly


    • Shayra March 6, 2018 / 6:17 pm

      Oh my god ! Can’t believe . Someone liked my work by heart . Really . Thanks a tonnnnn. . I will read your work too very soon πŸ˜ŠπŸ’
      God bless u

      Liked by 1 person

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