आईना


​आईना दिखाए सच्चाई

इंसान की रग रग से वाकिफ कराऐ

एक स्त्री आईने में खुद को निहारे

देख देख आईना फिर मुस्काये

आया गुस्सा उसको बड़ा

कुंडित स्वर में  आईने से पूछा

क्यों मुस्काये तू इतना बड़ा

आईना बोला , तू सोचती है तुझमे है नशा  बड़ा

पर है तुझको खुद पर गुररूर बड़ा, ये यौवन नही रहना सदा

श्रृंगार, सज संवर कर खड़ी है सामने, लगती मुझको बनावटी तेरी अदा

गुस्से में वो बुदबुदाई, ऊँचे स्वर में फिर   चिल्लाई

कुछ उलझी सी, कुछ नासमझी में , मन ही मन मे फुसफुसाई

बात तो तेरी कड़वी है, पर सत्य भी है बड़ी

सुन आईना , स्थाम्बित सा रह गया खड़ा

और फिर  निची आवाज़ में बोल पड़ा

जो देखता हूँ, वही दिखलाता हूँ

भीतर का दर्पण कहलाता हूँ

पहने तू लिबास झूठ का ओढे खड़ी है

ईर्ष्या, द्वेष, षड्यंत्र से भरी पड़ी है

कैसे कह दू कि तु सुंदर बड़ी है

76 thoughts on “आईना

    • Shayra October 26, 2017 / 7:44 am

      Sir, You write so well. Here is a contest for u nd I want you to participate in it.

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      • Shayra October 26, 2017 / 10:04 am

        Aagman group h ek on fb vha pr ye contest h apko page pr dikh jyga. Apni 2 poem send krni h bio nd pic. Anthology mh your poem will be published then nd no fees for that. You write well sir , give it a try👍

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      • Gouri (Gourav Anand) October 26, 2017 / 10:06 am

        Thank you so much.. i will definitely look for it on FB and most probably will participate as well.

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      • Gouri (Gourav Anand) October 26, 2017 / 10:11 am

        I have sent the request to join the group. Waiting for approval.

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      • Gouri (Gourav Anand) October 26, 2017 / 11:08 am

        In the mean time if you can suggest me, which two I shall send. Little confused.

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      • Shayra October 26, 2017 / 11:49 am

        Okk, sir . Sure. Which two you want to send?

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      • Gouri (Gourav Anand) October 26, 2017 / 12:40 pm

        In below mentioned four I want to select two..
        “पहचान”
        “परित्यक्त”
        “दीपशिखा”
        “एक था वो पागल”

        You tell, your opinion 😊

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      • Shayra October 26, 2017 / 2:13 pm

        I have to go through this poems first , then I will tell u . Vaise 2 one best lgi ab tk k 2,3 .Done . Masterpiece h sir

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      • Shayra October 26, 2017 / 4:43 pm

        I also need help. Which poem should I send?. Which 2 is suitable . Your opinion

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      • Gouri (Gourav Anand) October 26, 2017 / 4:46 pm

        Ohh you are also submitting? Name me the poems. Will read them

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      • Shayra October 26, 2017 / 4:50 pm

        Yes, sir . One of my friend has told me to submit it , shown me the page nd I want you to share your poem too . As your writer very well . Thinking about Rishte, Mirror or अस्तित्व। which two are better sir?

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      • Gouri (Gourav Anand) October 26, 2017 / 4:51 pm

        Ok will go through them and then let you my opinion. Are the too old or recent ones

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      • Shayra October 26, 2017 / 4:53 pm

        I have written very few . Check Rishte nd Mirror . Astitv vale b

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      • Shayra October 26, 2017 / 4:53 pm

        Otherwise I will try new . Abhi time h submission k date mh

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      • Gouri (Gourav Anand) October 26, 2017 / 4:57 pm

        Gargi, poems me kahin kahin thodi spelling mistakes hain submit karne se pehle unko sahi kar lena aur ‘coma’ ke bad wale lines ko ek space niche kar dena.

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      • Shayra October 26, 2017 / 5:00 pm

        Okk, sir. Meri hindi not so good . I will take care of it.

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      • Gouri (Gourav Anand) October 26, 2017 / 5:05 pm

        That’s not a big deal, I also still do mistakes, e aur double ee ki matra me abhi bhi mujhse galtiyaan hoti. It’s all about learning and improvising further. I learned english in my graduation 😊 and good part is that you know about your weak ends so you will rectify it very fast. If you need any of my help in editing of poems feel free to ask, I would be the most happy person to do that. “हिंदी कविता की जो बात है”

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      • Shayra October 26, 2017 / 5:10 pm

        Honoured sir. I do let you know , after editing.

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      • Shayra October 26, 2017 / 4:55 pm

        Okk, sir . Do it need little editing . Thanks a lot sir for suggesting me

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  1. Madhusudan October 26, 2017 / 8:41 am

    उम्दा लेखन।बहुत सुंदर कविता।

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  2. basedindianblog October 26, 2017 / 10:58 pm

    जो देखता हूँ, वही दिखलाता हूँ

    भीतर का दर्पण कहलाता हूँ

    Hehe very nice!

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    • Shayra October 26, 2017 / 5:42 pm

      Thanks for reading it nd visiting on my post😊

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  3. DOCUS October 28, 2017 / 4:06 pm

    Read your post after such a long time…a lot of change can be seen in your post..bahot khoob…its awesome gargi

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    • Shayra October 28, 2017 / 4:35 pm

      Thanks a lot . Would like to know what changes u have seen, bcoz I wrote these two after a long time

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      • DOCUS October 28, 2017 / 4:41 pm

        You have turned out to be more professional.Your selection of words,tenses,lines and topics are well manifested.Aisa lag raha as if I am reading another gargi.I mean pehle s bahot accha but thodi serious baatein karne lagi tum

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      • Shayra October 28, 2017 / 4:47 pm

        Thanks buddy. Aisa feedback toh ab to nhi mila . It seems new for me . Mlb teaching kaam aa rhi h. Trying to improve . Bas stay connected nd aise h genuine feedback dete rehna.

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      • DOCUS October 29, 2017 / 2:58 am

        Defiinitely teaching will help you a lot and its doing its part…god bless

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      • Shayra October 29, 2017 / 4:17 am

        God bless u too

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  4. Nathprasad Dhanawat October 30, 2017 / 5:29 am

    hey buddy… I’m not active on Instagram for some days … can I have your email id please.. coz I’m planning to write something by next year & I would need your help… So.. Please if you don’t mind giving…

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  5. Vaibhaw verma November 10, 2017 / 2:05 pm

    बेहद उम्दा अभिव्यक्ति है आपकी

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    • Shayra November 10, 2017 / 2:20 pm

      Thanks a lot . Good to see u again after a long😊. Thanku so much

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  6. shreyasukrity December 24, 2017 / 12:12 pm

    Amazing. Never thought that I’ll read the most beautiful hind poem on WordPress.

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      • Heart Queen February 22, 2018 / 4:02 pm

        Achaa laga bahut achha likhte ho aap

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      • Shayra February 22, 2018 / 4:23 pm

        Thanks a lot . I ‘m happy to see that you liked it 😊

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