भूल बैठा खुद को , मैं था एक मुसाफिर यहाँ
जीवन की आपा- धापी मे , गुम होते गए निशान
क्यों था मैं अनजान, नाम का था बस मैं इंसान
आज धूल पढ़ी है तस्वीर पर, निशब्द है ये जुबान
अल्फाज़ो के अर्थ ही नहीं, सांसो ने छोड़ दिया जब साथ
कौन था मैं, कहा से था आया, छूट गया अपनो का हाथ
रिश्तेनाते, यादे , थे ये चंद दिनों के मेहमान
देख रहा अपनो को रोता बिलखता, दर्द भरी माँ की पुकार
कह चला अलविदा सबको, नम आंखों से देख लिया सारा जहांन
तन्हा ही चल पड़ा अनजान डगर पर, तन्हा ही चल पड़ा लेकर अपना मुक्काम
बेशक थी अंधेरी गुफ़ा, ख़ौफ था ना, ना थे जख्मो के निशान
ना ग़म था दूर जाने का, ना थी कोई अधूरी आस
खुदा की रज़ा में थी मेरी रज़ा, अदभूत था वो अहसास
जान लिया खुद को खोकर, मिथ्या है ये सँसार
ज़िन्दगी का था इतना ही फलसफा
बाकी था कर्मो का हिसाब
सच का रूप देखा शांति औऱ प्रकाश
रूह को मिली अपनी सही पहचान
वाह वाह 👏👏👏👏
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Shukriya . I’m glad to see that you liked it
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You are welcome buddy.. 😇
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😊😊, yup. Thanks for reading my posts . If you have another demand , I will try to fulfil it too. Bcoz you are one of the genuine reader . Vaise toh sab h still bas I felt so kh diya.
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Thank you buddy…. Whatever you post .. I like to read ..So no demand now 😊😊
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You all made my day today . Today , I realized why I was feeling low from few days . I felt lost and turned off, but after writing and reading comments on my post esp from my genuine readers. I’m feeling much relaxed and inspired. Thank a ton for bringing me back.
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Yeah.. we are also happy to see you here… And yes … this is most genuine happiness which only can get on WP… I think..
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Not on any social networking sites..
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True, agree with you . Actually, I was engrossed in playing Choices which kept me away from writing , but today after writing . I’m actually feeling complete and happy.
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Yes absolutely… That’s the reason.. I like to be here.. nd I have deactivated my Facebook account after joining wp … we are always there to support each other.. best wishes for u…
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Same to you . Stay blessed buddy. I don’t use fb, insta very much , bcoz I feel that it was just for time paas . But I love WP very much😘
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Absolutely…. Because we really get learn here every day new … That’s make life happy..
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Absolutely agree with you.
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Yeah, I have realized now . It’s my favourite place which I’m missing , but now I ‘m back. It’s all possible bcoz of your and my fellow bloggers friends. 😊
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Behtarin tarike se likha gaya hai
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Thank you sir. Glad to see that you liked it. Means a lot coming from you bcoz you write amazing poems 👌
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Most welcome Gargi and thanks for such a wonderful comment. I would eat an extra chapati today as a reward. 😊😊
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Hahahaha, good sir but you deserve it. I always look forward to read your posts . Keep writing and inspiring us 😊
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Beautiful! Feeling a certain tranquility after reading it…ek sukoon!! Such a smooth rendition!! Great!! 👍👍
PS: is आपा- थापि correct or should it be आपा-धापी? 🤔
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Oh, thanks for the correction dear and thanks for your wonderful comment. Creative criticism is always welcomed, vaise it’s not a criticism . Feel free to share your thought on my writing .
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Thanks for taking it positively! 😁…sure will do!
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at last wapasi!!!
I was waiting for this only…
Bas yeh hi inspire karta hai…
Shandaar likha hai..
Never let the fire inside lower… bas likhti jao confidence will automatically increase 🙂
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Yeah, thanks a lot . Thoda time lagega vapas aane mh , but I will come sure for my genuine readers over here. Long gap k vajah se vo passion , desire miss ho rha tha but through your motivation and watching good feedback has ignite fire in me to write. Thanks a ton Utkarsh from the bottom of heart😊
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Welcome!!! Bas likho hum hai padne ko 🙂
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Yup, means a lot to me. I’m also there always for my lovely readers. Really, aj lga k khud k liye kuch kiya . Feeling much relaxed . Now, I will work on my story too which I left in-between.
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haan karo karo.. Khudko satisfaction dena sabse mushkil hota hai… And you achieved it ….
Waiting for story 🙂
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Yup, probably I will post it tomorrow. 😊
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🙂
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behtarin👍
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Bahut bahut shukriya 😊
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Kya bat 👌👍
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Shukriya. Thank u for reading it😊
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बहुत गहरी कविता हैं ! छोटी है मगर बहुत बड़ा सन्देश देती है ! तुम्हारी कल्पनाशाक्ति अद्भुत है
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Bahut bahut shukriya. Thank u for reading it . 😊
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bahut khoob
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Shukriya 😊
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Wow! This poem flows so well! Fabulously composed!
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Thanks a lot Nikesh. 😊
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You’re most welcome
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Simple yet Beautiful!
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Thank u so much . Thanks for visiting😊
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So beautifully penned 👏👏 the way you write is amazing..keep writing❤
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Thanks a lot . Thanks for reading it. Sorry, for late reply
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Nice one
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Thanku sir😊
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Welcome mam
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meaning full each any every line.
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Thanks a lot dear. Glad to hear that . Much appreciated for your visit here😊
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Wahh wahhh
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Shukriya . I appreciate that you take time to read my posts . Thanku😊
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Don’t mind but can I ask something?
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Yeah sure
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Kya you only write about technology ya you are willing to try , write poem or story . In hindi .
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Mtlb kaise. Smjha nhi me kuch
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Mera to ek hi blog hai ye. Isme me post nhi likhna chahta. But dusre me likh skta hu me
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Ek aur b blog h . ?
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Nahi abhi to nahi. But planning to start a new
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Okk👍
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Btao ap. Kya bta rhe the. Kis type ka or kya.
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Nothing
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Aap insta pe ya fb pe kahi ho kya ??
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No
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True
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