अतरंगी सा है वो ,थोड़ा सा शर्मिला
है बहुत ही हुशियार और रंगीला
नाम है जग्गा,जो है बड़ा ही सीधा साधा
चुप चुप रहता है वो ,मन का है सच्चा
थोड़ा सा हकलाता है शायद ,तब ही तो गाकर कहता
परवरिश हुई हास्पिटल मैं, सबसे घुलमिल करके रहता
प्रोफेसर बागला से जब वो मिला,बदल गयी उसकी दुनिया
मिला घर ,परिवार ,मिल गया जैसे कोई अपना
था वो अकलमंद,कुशाग्रबुद्धि वाला
मिस माला की अकस्मात मृत्यु का राज़
चुटकियों मे गाकर हल कर डाला
छोड़ उसे बॉर्ड स्कूल ,प्रोफेसर बाघला कही चले गए
बस आती थी उनकी केसेट ,प्रेम का पैगाम लिए
एक दिन हुआ कुछ ऐसा ,नही पहुंची उनकी यादे
हुआ उदास जग्गा ,सोचा कुछ तो है गड़बढ़ घोटाला
निकल पड़ा ढूंढने उन्हें , मिस श्रुति से जा मिला
निकली वो भी पंनोति मगर ,जग्गा की खुली किस्मत का ताला
है दिलचस्प बड़ा इनका सफर,गोल घुमखड़ वाला
सतरंगी शहर की दुनिया में ,गैम्बलर का था बोलबाला
हथियारों की होती थी समगलिंग
बक्षीर अलेक्जेंडर का था व्यापार फैला
रख धैर्य अपना ,सूझबूझ से सुलझाई यह पहेली
जग्गा और मिस श्रुति ने झेली मुसीबतो की टोली
अदला बदली कर डब्बो मैं पहुँचाई केक और पेस्ट्रीज
Hope you will like it.Love to hear your feedback ,though movie didn’t do well on box office but I loved it.Its like a musical poem .Let me know if it make sense😘
Love you and stay blessed😘
लाजवाब
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Thank you so much .Glad that you liked it .😊
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Kyaa khub likha hai…👌👌👌
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Shukriya Sir .Muje khushi hui k apko pasand aya.
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Swagat apka…
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I love ranbir.. but didn’t see movie.. nice post buddy
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Thanks ,I love him too and enjoyed his movie .It’s nice .Thanks for reading.
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Hey,I have posted 3 part .Would like to know whether you liked it or not??
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Ohh really.. then let me go …🏃🏃🏃🏃
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I don’t Rambeer but I like your writing…
It’s nice to read your poem instead of movie reviews….you can try this randomly…nice idea…
Best of luck dear 😘
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Thank you shubham .Glad you liked it.😊
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I want to watch this movie!
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Yeah ,sure .Be aware it’s didn’t get good response .But I liked the new concept .This movie was blended with humour,adventure ,emotional ,musical and moreover best part is creative .I liked this new concept .
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Very nice
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Thank you .Glad that you liked it.Thanks for reading .Do you have watched the movie?
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Welcome, I did not watch a movie, do you watch it
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Yes,I have watched it and liked it.
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You like Ranbeer Kapoor
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Yeah ,my favourite
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Woow great
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Yup💝
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That’s so sweet
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Thank you tanvir.happy that you liked it.
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Most welcome 😊😊😊
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Thanks for visiting😊
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Loved this movie….
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Thanks yaar ,chlo koi toh h jo movie ko samjha vrna toh ye flop h chli gyi 😢
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Actually it’s not everyone’s cup of tea to understand the flick!!😉 It was quite nice😊
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Yeah, Right.😊
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It did make sense to me!!
So, now I am planning to watch the movie.
Thanks to your beautiful poem.
P.S. just a question, hope you dont mind answering, why are you atheist???
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I’m not an aethiest,many blogger friends have asked this question many times.Now,I think it’s better to post.Its just a contradictory name to whatever I write here.Nothing more.
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Okay!! Pretty interesting……
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I’m glad to hear that you liked the poem .I liked the movie bcoz it is of my favourite actor and secondly I liked the new concept,found it creative one👍
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Ooho!! Ranbir Kapoor!! I like him too, though my fav is srk…..
No spoilers then, will watch it asap
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Thanks ,I would like to hear your reviews then.
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I will sure let you know!!!
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Thanks,I will wait to know about it.
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Yaar aap thanks bahot karte ho!!
Aur phir mujhe bhi wapas thanks kehna pad ta hai😂😂
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Okk,no thanks then.hahhahA!
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Ji shayara ji. Khuda kare to mulaqat hoti rahegi
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Nicely done. Bdw i loved the movie too
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Great to hear that . Most of the people found it boring , but it’s way creative . One can drift his soul to childhood days.😊
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Yeah!
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क्या बात है शायरा जी…. बहुत उम्मदा…
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Bahut bahut shukriya . Thanks for sparing some time to read my posts😊
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