खूबसुरत दुनिया नही, लोग होते है।
और कुछ रिश्ते खून से नहीं, दिल से जुड़े होते है
कस्मे वादे तो सब ही खाते है,कस्मे वादे तो सब ही खाते है
पर निभा जाने वाले लोग ,कुछ ही होते है।
आसमान ने कभी ऊचाई नहीं नापी
सागर ने कभी गहराई नहीं मापी
और वतन के लिए जान देने वालों ने
कफ़न के लिए कपडा
और दो गज़ जमीन नहीं मांगी।
झूठ की इस दुनिया मे,जैसे सच्चाई कम हैं
इंसाफ की देवी की आँखे ,न जाने क्यों बंद है
फरेब ,दगाबाजी और दहशत गर्दी ,का आलम है
चारो और खून खराबा ,लाशो का अम्बार लगा है
इंसानियत का कतल देख,खुदा भी आज खूब रोया है।
Waah waah 😏😉
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Thank you Orange😉
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वाह…. शानदार… लिखते रहिए… 👌👌👌
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Really,Its a long time I haven’t written any poem or Shayri in hindi.I’m glad that you liked it.
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Hey, Gargi I wanna say to u, write in Hindi too. You can write very well. I believe in u. Have a great sunday… 😍😍😍
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Thanks a lot Sayar.Yes ,from now I will read poems too in Hindi .Credit goes to you.Thanks for inspiring.😆
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Thanks for accepting suggestion. Credit goes to yr talent. We r friends so it’s our wrk to motivate each other. I m simply doing my work.
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That’s cool.Yes,I agree .Today I will post poem in Hindi which I wrote a long time ago.Hope you will enjoy 😃
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Hmm.. Post it. I will surely enjoy it
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👍
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Thank you Tanvir😊
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http://wp.me/p83RXy-17
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Beautiful… 3rd is just too good
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Thanks ,it will be improved more in next time.Thanks for cheering me for this post😊
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Ur welcome
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Amazing 👍👍… you are such great writer.. in Hindi… I’m shocked 👌👌
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वाह—शानदार👌👌👌
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Thank you sir.Muje Khushi hui k apko acha lga.Thanks for visiting😆
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Swagat aapka…
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बहुत खूब
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Shukriya😊
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I like first. It rhymes better. But meaning was good in all 3…😊✌
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Thanks for reading it.It will take some time to write in a flow .As I will get words in my mind ,I will do editing.Its just a try and on a demand of my sweet buddy Sayar.Its my duty to accept my fellow bloggers demand ,as they are loving and supporting .😆I’m happy that you liked it .
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Yup! Everyone gets better with time and learning never ends. It’s nice that you did. I’m writting rhymes for 5-6 years and till now, I could never write one on demand. It’s a difficult task and very very very difficult for me, so well done 👍 on your achievement. Keep it up and one day you’ll be giving instructions to new writers.😊✌
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😁,thanks for your kind words.I try to learn as much from others in this field and want to explore it in writing.
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Just told you the truth. Mention not..
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☺☺
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कफन के लिए कपड़ा और दो गज जमी नहीं मांगी– अच्छा लगा
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Thank you .If you have any suggestions regarding the post,You can tell me .I’m not very good in Shayri .But I like to try different everytime.Hope you will enjoy😆
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Nope they are perfectly fine you have put forward a great work in new attempt., you just need to take care of line alignments (left,centre,right) and no need to mark 1,2,3 a line at bottom would put more contrast.
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Thanks for your valuable advice.I understand your points except one.A line at bottom put more contrast,you mean to underline the content🤔
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You put marking 1 2 3 to differentiate all three rhymes so that the readers understand that they are separate. But you have already done it by putting graphics in between two of them. So there is no need to put numbers. And in case if you would have not put graphics then a simple line like this ————- between two rhymes would look great!!!
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Thanks,yes it will look more elegant .I will surely work on it.
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Keep trying different every time they bring more colours. I m not so good in literature English. Otherwise I would have also attempted like yours experiment.
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So what .You should also explore your writing .A creativity has no bounds ,no limits and it will make you and all of us a great Writer.As much you will try ,more and more you will gain and reached to its depth.
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Hey !! You know I am very passionate about learning new languages. I already did diploma in urdu and right now doing in sanskrit. Apart from that I am also trying my luck with French!! Hope will succeed in adding more linguistic colour to my writings..
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Oh,thats cool .I love Urdu Language but don’t know how to improve it.Yes,I will like to see your posts in different languages.More colours in your writing.
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बैहतरीन। True essence of a writer who can write in multiple languages and that too beautifully ✨😍
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Thanks a lot for the beautiful comment .I’m glad that my little efforts did not went in vain.😊
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Welcome 🙂 It can never go in vain. A writer writes through heart. It is always beautiful. It is just about right audience. 😊 Keep writing.
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Yes,and I’m lucky bcoz I got right and beautiful audience 😊
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Yes. This is a wonderful platform to appreciate and connect with beautiful writers. 🙂
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I totally agree with you 😊
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Glad😃.
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I’m not able to see your posts.Asking for your permission .Send me the link😊
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Ok sure
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https://kkhushal.wordpress.com
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Thanks,Now I can see your posts.
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You’re welcome. I hope you will like them🙂
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Yes,I enjoyed them that’s why I have nominated you ,but you didn’t answer it.Anyway ,it’s your choice ,but I like reading your posts.I have read many ,few are left.
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I am so sorry. But I don’t do nomination or blog posts as blogging for me has altogether different meaning. I appreciate if someone nominate me but feels guilty that I won’t be able to do the same. 😢Thanks once again for that nomination. 🙂
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Ohh,it’s fine .No need to be sorry.
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😑 I hope you understand. Stay blessed 🙂
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Yes,I understand.Have a good day😊
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You too have a great week ahead. 😊
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Very nice Shayra
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Thank you dannel.It means a lot to me.
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Welcome Shayra
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Amazing shayra ji….. Great thoughts 👌👌
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Thanks a lot.See ,I have fix the problem.
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All 3 were amazing.But the last line of the last shayari touched my heart so so so much.And ha ye siddhu wala animation mast yha.Thoko!Thoko!Ab na roko.
Mai hindi utti achi likh ni pata but I am flattered by your hindi.How about giving your address so that I can have an autograph?
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Oh,It’s a biggest compliment which I have got here.Thank you sooo much .I’m flattered by your writing .You write amazing contents .You have a long way to go.Good luck 👍
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Thankyou once again.What does shayra mean?
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I don’t know ,it’s not my real name .It’s just choose for site.
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Oh ok gargi
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Yes,Gargi is my name.
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Amazing!
क्या बात है।
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Bahut bahut Shukriya😊
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Wah wah, wah wah..😀
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Thoko tali ,Hhhha .Thank for reading ,Now two days I will only read posts of you and other bloggers 😊
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😂 siddhu paji cha gaye😂 , it was nice,actually!!😇
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Thanks dear .It’s just a trial 😊
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👏👏👏👏👏
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Thank you buddy😊.I have nominate your for Unique Blogger Award
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Thank you, but wait, I am not in your list of unique blogger award again.
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Yes,You are in list of Blue Sky Tag Blog Award again.
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☺️☺️☺️
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Beautifully written 👏 👏
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Thank you so much for reading my posts.Means a lot .😊.I will visit to your blogs soon.
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It will be a pleasure if you read my work💞. You write really really well. I m learning from you a lot. Keep going 🌟
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Thanks a lot .I have never expect that One can learn from me .It’s a huge compliment for me 😊😊. Thank you sooo much for visiting here and appreciating my posts.
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Bhut bdia.
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Keep it up
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Thanku 😊
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