Disciple in an Ant’s Hermit

Hey lovelies,

Here is. Wonderful masterpiece written by my amazing friend Ujjwal .I liked it so much that I want to share on my site

I admired the sky searching for it’s border
The sky twisted it’s mouth with a pride rather

“Be in your limits” the sky laments

It was his time;I must bear the torment.

Here,a one more masterpiece of my friend Ujjwal .He is a amazing writer who creates magic in his writings.

Here ,one more beautiful poem of him

Forest Is Not Dead

Subsequently I managed to reach the dark wood

Pinched yellow path,demarcated well by those trodden black leaves

Essence of the soil well manifested by the off-beat rain

Thick brown stems and swaying branches

Here a link:-

https://ujjwalrealblog.wordpress.com/2017/06/24/disciple-in-an-ants-hermit/comment-page-1/#comment-931

Must visit  Ujjwalrealblog and enjoy reading his awesome posts.

22 thoughts on “Disciple in an Ant’s Hermit

    • Shayra June 24, 2017 / 8:35 am

      A small request mam,Please visit to Tribute to Blogger bcoz it’s written for you All .Way to thank you ,if I could know other way I will do that also willingly.

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  1. hati03nisa June 24, 2017 / 10:03 am

    It is really good, I ve read it too thank for reblog; really kind of you dear

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  2. jyo June 25, 2017 / 3:59 am

    Nice write up !!

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    • Shayra June 25, 2017 / 4:10 am

      Thanks Jyo for reading it.Yes,its nice that’s why I Reblog it.

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  3. ujjwalrealblog June 25, 2017 / 2:42 pm

    Thanks a lot shayra for such kind act of yours.I am so so glad and pleased at the same moment.Just a thing,I think you did a little mistake in the title of poem…Thanks a ton

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    • Shayra June 25, 2017 / 2:44 pm

      Ohh,I will correct it now .Tell me in deatil what mistake or I will read it again.

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      • ujjwalrealblog June 25, 2017 / 2:49 pm

        You dont need to read again.The title reads “Disciple in an ant’s hermit”

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      • Shayra June 25, 2017 / 2:50 pm

        Sorry,but I’m not getting your point.What mistake I have done.Okk ,let me read it.

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      • ujjwalrealblog June 25, 2017 / 2:52 pm

        You have mistaken In writing the title’s name

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      • Shayra June 25, 2017 / 2:53 pm

        Lost me ,title you are talikng about.

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      • ujjwalrealblog June 25, 2017 / 2:55 pm

        Tumne jo poem reblog kari hai uske title me tumne galti ki hai.Mere poem ka title hai ‘Disciple in an ant’s hermit’ but tumne likha hai ‘Discipline In ant’s hermit’

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      • Shayra June 25, 2017 / 2:57 pm

        Ohh,I get it .Sorry,for the mistake.Thanks for informing and I will correct it.

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      • ujjwalrealblog June 25, 2017 / 2:59 pm

        My pleasure.If you are interested in politics then you may like my new post.You read whenever you are free.Thankyou for reblog once again shayra

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      • Shayra June 25, 2017 / 3:00 pm

        Its my pleasure to Reblog your post here.Yes,I dont like politics ,but still I will read it.I know it will be amazing.

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      • ujjwalrealblog June 25, 2017 / 3:08 pm

        Oh thanks a lot.Your comments often amazes me

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