Adventurous Night

Sailed in the life boat,looked aside

What a fate has discovered,hovers in the   mind

Gaze at his wild eyes,Discovered blood of mine

Savoured fresh juice ,lustful toungue

Swaying in delight

Out of blue a long jump,scared me from inside

Adrenaline rushed in nerves,Drenched away fear to kept aside

Body burnt in ashes,Withered  from outside

Soul asked from inside,how to remain alive

Deep silence throbbed my  mind

Made a rift ,to distant him from the side

Infinite Ocean , Melancholy Sight

Crestfallen  from  inside

Dark Haunted nights,Dark moonlight

Splash !Thunder splash of Water

Heart beat stopped for a while

Grandeur Whale cut off the  side

Jolted Me and Parker from Inside

Yearning  for help ,Yearning  for life

My heart melts at the sight

Humanity flutters in the mind

Reached to beautiful island,In a delight

Ate Algae and nuts ,To survive

Found a human teeth ,aghast  us from inside

A carnivorous Island,echo in the mind

Moved to jungles ,sailed day and night

Where lost Parker ,grieved my heart from Inside

Starved for breathe,When open eyes

Saw me in hospital ,Safe and alright

Lasting memories,Unexpressable notions

Lingered in the mind

Love

Gargi

29 thoughts on “Adventurous Night

    • Shayra June 8, 2017 / 3:01 pm

      Thanku so much for reading it .I was influenced by this movie ,seen onlf half part of it.

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    • Shayra June 8, 2017 / 3:00 pm

      Thank u so much for reading it.I have not seen full movie ,but was influenced by it .Just a attempt to write it in form of poem.

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      • Shayra June 8, 2017 / 3:02 pm

        Thanku for beautiful comment .It made my day .It’s a challenge for me and took good time to penned down

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      • Shiva Malekopmath June 9, 2017 / 6:45 am

        Shayra you saw the movie half and have written a full poem, this is incredible.
        So now you can complete the other half of the movie in your own way. πŸ˜ƒ
        Shiva🎢

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      • Shayra June 9, 2017 / 6:49 am

        Hhahaha,I have read summary of the story and then started imagening the whole picture .I have wrote it in few parts .It’s a small attempt to try something Different.

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      • Shayra June 9, 2017 / 6:58 am

        Thank you for inspiring comment Sir .I’m glad in this writing journey ,I will get good opportunity to learn from other amazing writers like you.

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        In that case read as many blogs as possible especially the older ones of some bloggers.
        If you can see my blog through desk top you can see my menus, through them you can go to your choice.
        All the Best to YOU.
        Shiva

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      • Shayra June 9, 2017 / 8:53 am

        Thank you sir for your kind advice .I will read all blogs of yours and others .

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  1. Akshay kumar June 8, 2017 / 5:47 pm

    Good work, keep writing

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  2. Akshay kumar June 8, 2017 / 5:56 pm

    Your welcome πŸ™‚ thanks for lovely posts

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    • Shayra June 9, 2017 / 4:31 pm

      Ohh! Really.thanks for appreciation .I’m grateful to you .

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  3. shooting star June 13, 2017 / 6:43 pm

    Wow!! Beautifully penned! I loved the way your diction flows… Great poem. Loved it πŸ™‚

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    • Shayra June 14, 2017 / 2:38 am

      Thank you for the beautiful comment.Thanks for visiting here.Thanks a lotπŸ˜†

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