Sailed in the life boat,looked aside
What a fate has discovered,hovers in the mind
Gaze at his wild eyes,Discovered blood of mine
Savoured fresh juice ,lustful toungue
Swaying in delight
Out of blue a long jump,scared me from inside
Adrenaline rushed in nerves,Drenched away fear to kept aside
Body burnt in ashes,Withered from outside
Soul asked from inside,how to remain alive
Deep silence throbbed my mind
Made a rift ,to distant him from the side
Infinite Ocean , Melancholy Sight
Crestfallen from inside
Dark Haunted nights,Dark moonlight
Splash !Thunder splash of Water
Heart beat stopped for a while
Grandeur Whale cut off the side
Jolted Me and Parker from Inside
Yearning for help ,Yearning for life
My heart melts at the sight
Humanity flutters in the mind
Reached to beautiful island,In a delight
Ate Algae and nuts ,To survive
Found a human teeth ,aghast us from inside
A carnivorous Island,echo in the mind
Moved to jungles ,sailed day and night
Where lost Parker ,grieved my heart from Inside
Starved for breathe,When open eyes
Saw me in hospital ,Safe and alright
Lasting memories,Unexpressable notions
Lingered in the mind
Love
Gargi
Very nicely penned, i have watched this movie.
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Thanku so much for reading it .I was influenced by this movie ,seen onlf half part of it.
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Incredible!! Life of a pie!! Awesome!!
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Thank u so much for reading it.I have not seen full movie ,but was influenced by it .Just a attempt to write it in form of poem.
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Poem was incredible!!
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Thanku for beautiful comment .It made my day .It’s a challenge for me and took good time to penned down
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😊😊😊😊
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Shayra you saw the movie half and have written a full poem, this is incredible.
So now you can complete the other half of the movie in your own way. 😃
Shiva🎶
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Hhahaha,I have read summary of the story and then started imagening the whole picture .I have wrote it in few parts .It’s a small attempt to try something Different.
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You can be a good story writer.
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Thank you for inspiring comment Sir .I’m glad in this writing journey ,I will get good opportunity to learn from other amazing writers like you.
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In that case read as many blogs as possible especially the older ones of some bloggers.
If you can see my blog through desk top you can see my menus, through them you can go to your choice.
All the Best to YOU.
Shiva
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Thank you sir for your kind advice .I will read all blogs of yours and others .
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Good work, keep writing
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Thank you for reading and following my blog😆
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Your welcome 🙂 thanks for lovely posts
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Thank u 😃
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Nice post
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Thanks once again .I’m grateful that you liked it
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Every thing what others has said and you made me watch this again with a different angle.
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Ohh! Really.thanks for appreciation .I’m grateful to you .
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Wow!! Beautifully penned! I loved the way your diction flows… Great poem. Loved it 🙂
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Thanks a lot dear for informing me.😊.I will surely check out it.
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Thanks dear😊
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